Saturday, March 19, 2011

Shoes

You see that shoe.
And you think of how that shoe is just like you.

Dirty around the edges,
Not perfect
But a good fit
Not perfect
Yet still your second favorite color
Not perfect
But still pretty cute

And you think of how the shoe is just like you

Taking you places
Pushing you forward
Even
When
You'd rather sit
Lay down
Or just stand

And you think of how the shoe is just like you

Bringing adventure
Trial
Hardship
Obstacles
But coming in packages,
So you get
Friendship
And
Love

And you think of how the shoe is just like you

Sometimes making mistakes
Stubbing a toe
Staining the leather
And you wonder
What makes up for it all?
The days i spend shining
My shoes?
Or the days i spend shining
Her shoes?

And you think of how the shoe is just like you

Everyday
Trying
Sometimes
Falling short
Sometimes
Not good enough

And you think of how the shoe is just like you

Always living
And
Always walking



3 comments:

  1. So true. You're such a good writer Hannah--I don't know too many people who have such a good imagination that they can compare people to shoes and make it sound that amazing. Please keep writing, and I'll keep reading :)

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  2. your too nice :) i was inspired by my 5th grade teacher! thanks, though

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  3. ok how do you ever think of such AMAZING writing like that?? u have a gift and i LooOOoove your work!!

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