I know the picture probably doesn't make sense unless you were in my 7th grade English class. So here, it has to do with this poem I wrote. I wanted to add it to my blog because to me, it is something of a fantasy-don't worry, it's not real!
DAISIES
Surrounded by daises
I begin
He loves me, he loves me not
With the sky so pure
And spring so near
He loves me, he loves me not
With happy laugher echoing across the school grounds
And the bounce of a ball against the pavement
He loves me, he loves me not
One can only hope
Only wish
He loves me, he loves me not
Feeling a gaze like nails-piercing me to the heart
But they’re eyes that are full of wonder-confusion
He loves me, he loves me not
I look up
He is watching me
He loves me, he loves me not
I am sitting on grass, prickly like needles
My bare purple nails are winking with the sun
He loves me, he loves me not
He stands and smiles
My heart feels like it is going to blow away
He loves me, he loves me not
But it is heavy, and stays on the ground
He is walking past me
He loves me, he loves me not
He keeps going-
I am but a fly buzzing on the window
He loves me, he loves me not
Stopping, he bends down on one knee-picking up something
A daisy
He loves me, he loves me not
Now-picking off the petals, one at a time
Smiling at some, wincing at others
He loves me, he loves me not
He is grinning
Holding his daisy like a crown
He loves me, he loves me not
With one petal left on his crown
He glances up at me
He loves me, he loves me not
He is standing-walking
Towards me
He loves me, he loves me not
Pulling me to my feet-our hands are clasped by our sides
He whispers in my ear, picking the last jewel off his crown
She loves me
that makes me feel happy inside....same as ever...funny how things have changed since then dont you think
ReplyDeleteEvery time I read it, it gets better and better. You are a really gifted writer, Hannah, and I hope you know that :)
ReplyDeleteThanks :) So are you! You are amazing!
ReplyDeleteHannah! Oh my gosh! Thank you so much for sharing your site with me. I loved your poem so much. You have an amazing talent! You rock!
ReplyDeleteSherri
i looooove reading it....wistful thinking i suppose
ReplyDeleteI love that Poem!!! its so sweet! you have great potential to be a writer. thinking of anyone in particular when you wrote it? ;)
ReplyDeletehahahaha
ReplyDeleteWowwww okay this is like a year after you wrote this poem but whatever. Okay now I understand it fully ;D
ReplyDeletegood job :) just don't tell anyone, like, awkward!!
ReplyDeleteHaha I can't believe you found my comment! No, Hannah, I'm totally going to tell the world what that poem means. Come on would I really?
ReplyDeletei can't believe that you responded to my responding post! but thanks :)
ReplyDeleteHaha, you're welcome ;D
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